This was Table no.19 in the college cafeteria, with the paper cups on a tacky table cloth. The occupants were young and brimming with ideas. They fell in love with the intellectual vibrancy, and wavelengths that matched.
Circa 2017, they had migrated to the finest china and exotic cuisines on reserved tables, in upmarket restaurants. Etiquette coaches and style consultants were hired, to present their success to the world, on an appropriate platform. She was not permitted to say or do anything, which could hurt her husband’s business interest or personal brand. Caesar’s wife always had to be above board.
Helen longed for the same mental connect, tuning in to the other’s thoughts, and completing each other’s unspoken sentences. The irony being that the partner had not changed, only the life settings. Or did the partners change? They were now married to wealth.
(143 words)
Inspired by Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer Challenge
Picture: Dawn Miller
The more things change, the more they stay the same.
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Well done and a great message.
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Loved this story of the unimportance of materialism!
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very nice story 🙂
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Beautifully written. It is easy to be consumed by materialism in this day and age.
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Liked how you structured this Reena…
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Loved how you moved from student to merchants from poverty to wealth in so few words.
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So true how we can lose sight of what matters for material things.
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Wonderful story Reena! I imagine this same thing has happened to a lot of married couples. Love seems to leave the marriage when materialism takes over their priorities.
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This is beautiful, and spells out the dangers of materialism! 💜
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Wow, a great message and nicely put across.
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Very true. I loved this story.
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