Whose fire was it
that demanded appeasement?
The rains wet the earth
unmindful of passion
raging below the surface.
Inspired by Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry #Challenge-24
https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/03/07/colleens-weekly-tanka-poetry-challenge-24-fire-rain/
beautiful!
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Excellent! I love the passion simmering below the surface. Well done! ❤
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Thanks!
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