The devil in the vase smiled at her again. It was a mocking smile that scared the wits out of her. She screamed and ran out of the room.
It was followed by torture in the mental asylum. She hated the nurses in white uniforms, with indifferent expressions that bordered on cruelty. She detested the doctors who delivered the painful pricks and the unbearable electric shocks. Her stomach churned to see the sick people around her, nonchalantly indulging in horrendous, repulsive acts.
Why had life turned so dark? She remembered her blissful childhood in the arms of her mother, and the luxurious vacations they spent together abroad. Her world had turned upside down, with the untimely death of her mother, and the entry of a stepmother in the house. People said she was a renowned actress, and the palatial house was a perfect framework for her picturesque beauty. It made her wonder what beauty meant. The calm, serene expression on her mother’s face, peaceful even in death, or the face fixed by hairdressers and makeup experts, on her stepmother’s tall frame.
She was the only one who could see the devil in the vase. And nobody had ever believed her.
Inspired by Sunday Photo Fiction – January 15,2017
“The devil in the vase smiled at her again.” What a killer first sentence! Awesome work. You did an amazing job fitting quite a lot of story into such a small space.
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Thank you so much. The appreciation is much valued.
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Amazingly descriptive, you did a great job in bringing the reader into the terrified mindset of the main character.
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Thanks, Jade! The victim here, is unable to break the aura around a star, and expose the real person.
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On the edge of my seat post. Well done.
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Thanks.
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Well written. Horrifying conclusion.
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The prompt was so horrifying 😀
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Thought provoking –
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Thanks.
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Well-spun so that it could be read either way. Is she really crazy or not, and how would she even be able to tell, in that environment? I especially liked the line, “It made her wonder what beauty meant.”
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It is all about perspectives 😀
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An interesting and sensitive take on the prompt.
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That was great. I wonder if her stepmother was poisoning her to get rid of her. Another wicked stepmother story
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And the great question left unanswered.
Well done.
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A vivid portrait of mental torture. Nice use of the prompt.
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